barsaat

nile aasman me yu
achanak Kali ghta
ka cha jana
acha lgta hai,
acha lgta hai, fir
wo thndi thndi
mdhosh kr deni
wali bundon ka tp tp
krke yu jmiin pe girna,
fiza me mhkne wali
wo bheegi hui mitti
ki saundhi saundhi
khusbo ka ehsas krna
acha lgta hai,
acha lgta hai, barsat
me un chote chote
bchcho ko bhigte
hue dekhna,
badlo k bich chmtki
bichli ka yu aankh
micholi khelna
acha lgta hai,
acha lgta hai, is bdra
ka bejan pde pedh
podho pe girkr unhe
nyi jindgi dena,
yu khilkhilakr nachte
hue pkshion ke jodo
ko dekhna
acha lgta hai,
acha lgta hai, fir se
suraj ka yu charo
trf apna tej bikherna
or raj kayam krna,
door un phadhon
k piche hlke hlke
rng birnge rango se
bne indr-dhnush ko
bnte hue dekhna
acha lgta hai,
acha lgta hai, prakrti ko
niharna mano kuch
khna chah rhi ho
trpt ho chuki hu me
dhrti, sayd ye btana
chah rhi ho,
us thndi hwa ka
sharir ko chukr
gujr jana ik ajiib
si kpkpaht hona
acha lgta hai,
acha lgta hai,,,
iam new to this field after 2 dats i started this is my first poem or poetry
plzzz comment and gave me somw guidance about it……
thanks